Tuesday, May 11, 2010

Teaser Tuesday

From my YA WIP, "Anemone"

I stepped off the bus into the warm sunshine and waved goodbye to the guys as they walked toward their street. The bench caught my eye, almost glowing with its emptiness. I slung my messenger bag over my shoulder and turned to head home.

As the roar of the bus faded behind me, I heard a hesitant voice.


I turned again and saw Reagan sitting in the same spot as this morning, wearing the same clothes. Her eyes looked worried.

“Where did you come from?” I asked.

“Here. You walked right past me.”

I raised an eyebrow and laughed. “Okay. Where are the cameras?”

“This isn’t a joke, Brady,” she said in a raised voice. There was that anxious vibe again, emanating off of her like steam.

I sat next to her with a mock stern look. “Because if I’m going to end up on some reality show, I feel like I should comb my hair or something.” That made her smile. “There it is.” I smiled back.


  1. Am I drawn in? Yes. I'm filling in the blanks in my mind right now. What happened? What is about to happen?

  2. Wow you left it so open ended that I'm curious to know what it's all about!!! I love the "I feel like I should comb my hair or something line" too funny!

  3. Do I really have to say it? TEASER TUESDAYS ARE NOT FUN!!!!

  4. I want more :) This was intriguing.

  5. Yes, I want to read this! (And love the title.)

  6. Very good! I rather enjoyed it and brought my mood up just a bit! Sorry i haven't been around for awhile!